Thursday 10 November 2016

Flying Fox writing


"Bwhagh!" I screamed as Arron threw me off the plaform, I half expected to fall but I knew the harness would hold me up. I twisted and turned and occasionally flipped upside down. Then once I was unclipped I smiled at Mr B before dragging the rope back up the hill. By the time I got back in line my face was red from puffing. I recon that the flying fox was the 2nd awesomest activity on camp, bested only by the waterslide. 
By Holly Trigg

5 comments:

  1. Wow that sundes fun I aonle got to goes on the flying fox.

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  2. Great story Holly. Amazing complex sentences. What are you going to write about next.

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  3. Very funny Holly that is what I would do if I was an adult

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  4. nice peace of writing

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