My shoes

My shoes
I was learning to prottend that I was in an other persons shoes.

I was a young boy sitting on a bench and a group of boys walked over to me and started laughing at me because my shoes had wholes inside them. So I got up and went for a walk around the park and sat down at a bench and I noticed that there was an other boy across from me he smiled and waved at me. I looked down at his shoes and then at mine I stood up and walked over to a tree sat down and took off my shoes. I put my hands inside them and prottended that they were alive. I said "I want to be like him."three times and my dream came true only it wasn't a dream come true I found out the boy couldn't walk. So I was stuck as a boy that couldn't walk then I heard loud chearing with joy and it was the boy that couldn't walk he was so glade that he could walk and run.

My shoes

I was retelling a story and including dialogue

“Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha”
“We're did ya get those shoes”
“Probably from the dump”
Haha
I got up and slowly made my way to the park. Sitting on the park bench, I saw a kid sitting on the bench beside me. He looked rich, great shoes, pants with no holes on them unlike mine.

I got up and walked over to a tree stump. I took off my shoes, they were my only friends. I don't like being poor I said
I wish I could be like him, I want to be like him I said.
Suddenly it clicked I started running around the trees like a lunatic.

I saw a lady coming towards the rich kid with a wheelchair and to my surprise it turns out he was paralyzed as I watched his mum push the wheelchair further and further away it made me think maybe I should just be grateful for who I am

At the start we line up I had butterflies in my stomach, on your marks, get set, GO! The teacher said I start slowly jogging, when i got in the wetlands I was panting but not loudly I was breathing Slowly. When I was up the hill I was walking and running, walking and running Isaac and Tyrell were by me and putting me off by there Breathing Isaac got in front of me for about the whole race. On the last lap of the field i was in the wetlands when Isaac was still in front of me i get up the hill and sprint past Isaac and finished with 12th place. After the race i fall on the ground relaxed with the sun shining on my face my mum and dad come to congratulate me, he brings me my water bottle and i pour my water on me and have lunch. :)

29.8.16 Save the sea turtles lives.
Sea turtles are amazing, because they have been around 150,000,000 years ago surviving the dinosaur age. There lifecycle  is so amazing and complicated.

First there lifecycle starts with baby turtle sleeping inside the egg then one and a half month later the baby sea turtle sees his first light and dashes to the beach.  Then if they are lucky enough they make it to the deep ocean. After they make it to the ocean, they grow and then breed and lay eggs and the eggs hatch again but 20% never hatch.

Secondly when they dash to the beach there's predators waiting for them to eat. Because of the predators only 50% of the baby turtles survive. When they make it to the deep ocean they have to face with bigger predators like great whites,bull sharks and even orcas (killer whale).

Because of the humans sea turtles die  because of the rubbish and also the chemical.

Now let's go over the facts again  1000 eggs laid, 800 hatches  then 400 survive from beach predators and 200 survive from sharks 2 survive from us so finally only 2  survive because of us..

save the sea turtles lives
26.8.16
Sea turtles are amazing, because they have been around 150,000,000 years ago surviving the dinosaur age. There lifecycle  is so amazing and complicated.

First there lifecycle starts with baby turtle sleeping inside the egg then one and a half month later the baby sea turtle sees his first light and dashes to the beach.  Then if they are lucky enough they make it to the deep ocean. After they make it to the ocean, they grow and then breed and lay eggs and the eggs hatch again but 20% never hatch.

Secondly when they dash to the beach there's predators waiting for them to eat. Because of the predators only 50% of the baby turtles survive. When they make it to the deep ocean they have to face with bigger predators like great whites,bull sharks and even orcas (killer whale).

Because of the humans sea turtles die  because of the rubbish and also the chemical.

Now let's go over the facts again  1000 eggs laid, 800 hatches  then 400 survive from beach predators and 200 survive from sharks 2 survive from us so finally only 2  survive because of us..

Save the sea turtles lives!
In this writing I learned how to write an explanation.

My Shoes

My Shoes
By Jayden Steward


Swinging on a bench, I'm having flashbacks at people laughing at my ridiculous shoes with holes in the front of them. Wondering how long people will notice and laugh at me. Moving away I walk over the bridge looking at the reflection in the water of my cut, ripped and shredded shoes. Walking along the path I see a kid with really nice clothes and shoes but he seems not to be moving? I sit down on the other side of the bench.I look down looking at my shoes he gives me a friendly wave. I sit down against a tree and start to talk to my shoes. I say "I wish i could be like him" 3 times then some how I'm in the place of the boys body but I'm disabled I can't move my legs. Then a lady comes and says sorry I'm late. I hear the other boy jumping and cheering as I'm wheeled away

I was for the first time working on AAAWWUUBBIS

BREAKING NEWS 

THE WORLD'S SMALLEST BABY!

We have confirmed reports that a baby was born in middle more hospital has been born. BUT  the baby felt light so the doctors  weighed him and he was the normal weight! but the baby seemed small so they put the baby on the hight chart and they waited... and waited... the hight was found he was confirmed the worlds smallest baby! the nurses wanted to keep it a secret but they thought that the mother and the father should know but the parents told the news people and thats why were here ad the baby was a girl and the parents called her Stacy 

Cross country

Lining up to race, boys and girls shouting everywhere. I felt

sick lining up with some of the fastest people in our school like, Lucas, Jessie and Brady. “On your marks get

Set” bang! The clappers went, running heart pounding wind blowing on my face; it’s a beautiful day I say to myself it’s so sunny.I was coming 9th with Carl in front of me and Jake behind.

Zooming out of the wetlands still coming 9th about to pass Carl who is breathing heavily slowing as I cross the car park running across the hill then down then back down the hill and at the start of the wetlands I did that all again then the third time through the wetlands I overtook Carl and sprinted to the end.So over all I came 8th I say as I fall to the ground.

By Braden

My Shoes

I was learning to retell a story

My shoes

The boy thudded down the footpath, he was coming my way, what should I do. He sits, but he isn't  happy, in fact he looks troubled. I want to say something, anything but I can't, I wave but he still just looks down and then he is gone. Sitting by a tree he pulls off his shoes and is making them talk, but it makes him more sad. Now he is muttering something I can't hear. Where am I, who am I. Shaking I pull myself up, I don't fall instead I take a few steps and then a few more. I CAN WALK! I run and run and run some more. But then I hear Gran “ Hello time to hop in your chair.” The boy looks confused. And then he is gone wheeled away by Gran.

By Bailey

29.8.16   In this piece of writing I was learning to write an explanation.
The Survival Of The Sea Turtle

Sea Turtles are actually quite fascinating,

They have been around for more than 150 million years, they're lucky enough to survive the dinosaur age.

The life cycle

The mother lays 1000 eggs above shore, roughly 1 month later 80% of them hatch and the other 20% of them never hatch,then 50% of the ones who hatched make to the water the other ones get eaten or killed by the predator awaiting them such as, Seagulls, Crabs, Raccoons and many more. 50% of the ones who make to water progress to adulthood, They hide in flotsam to feed on and rest in. 20 of them make it to breeding stage,and finally 2 of them make it to breeding stage with human interference.

So out of 1000 eggs only 2 of them survive the life cycle so they can reproduce.

So save the sea turtles lives!
By Carter